



Luna Lola
The Moon Wolf and The Hidden Power
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3.4 • 7 Ratings
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- £3.99
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- £3.99
Publisher Description
"I, Grayson Dawson, Alpha of the Moonlit Pack, reject you, Lola Ashton, as my mate and Luna of this pack," I heard Grayson's voice reach my ear and a single tear ran down my left cheek as it felt like my heart was being ripped out of my chest.
"I, Lola Ashton, accept..." I did not finish my sentence before he held me up by my throat and snarled in my face. His eyes had already changed colors so I knew his wolf was in charge.
"You will not reject me, slut. I am your owner and I tell you what to do and when," he slapped me across the face and threw me on the ground.
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After being rejected by her mate in the Moonlit pack, Lola escaped on a full moon only to enter the territory of the next Alpha King who also happened to be her second chance mate.
Adrian is the next Alpha King but he hasn't been able to assume his role because he needed a Luna by his side. A rogue that trespassed on his territory, whom he ordered be killed turned out to be his mate leaving him in a dilemma.
Will Adrian reject Lola because she came into his territory as a rogue? Will he overcome what happened to him in the past and give Lola a chance or reject her and go ahead with Fay as his chosen Luna?
What will happen when everyone finds out just how much power Lola wields and how she's supposed to protect her kind in an oncoming war? Find out in Lola- The Moon Wolf!
Customer Reviews
Love the storyline but…
I’m really enjoying this read, but the mix up in names, characters that don’t exist and grammar errors are really irritating. You can workout who the write is referring to but it messes up the flow of the read.
If not for the errors I would leave 5 stars
Good story, too many typos
Good story but too many typos that often disrupt the flow of story. This was second of 4 books in series and same errors through both of them. Shame as story is good. I would suggest proofreading before publishing
It got worse
Thought book 2 might be better than book 1 ,I was wrong. So many typos some sentences didn’t make sense, rambling rubbish, I gave up about half through.